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Frank 首先祝贺你顺利通过此次考试!你对自己本学期的表现满意吗?老师不是很满意哦。首先是你的作业完成情况一直不是很好。要想做一名好学生,在学校要听老师的话,在家要听家长的话,作业一定要及时按质按量完成。由于你一开始经常不能完成作业,你的书写还是个问题,希望你继续努力,提升自己的书写能力。新学期马上就要开始了,希望你以认真的态度对待自己的学习。加油!

如何写英文学生评语

Judy首先祝贺你顺利通过此次考试!你对自己本学期的表现满意吗?老师不是很满意哦。前半学期你的表现还是不错的,上课认真听讲,作业也能及时完成。但你后半学期的表现让老师不是很满意。作业老是不能按质按量完成,你这次单词鉴定就是一次教训。冰冻三尺非一日之寒!希望你一直以饱满的热情投入到佳音的学习中来,我相信你一定可以做的更好!加油!

Tom首先祝贺你顺利通过此次考试!你对自己本学期的表现满意吗?老师不是很满意哦。你的作业完成情况一直不是很好,你这次单词鉴定就是一次教训。由于你一开始经常不能完成作业,你的书写还是个问题,希望你继续努力,提升自己的书写能力。新学期马上就要开始了,希望你以认真的态度对待自己的学习,老师相信你一定可以走得更远。加油!

Kevin首先祝贺你以优异的成绩通过此次考试!你对自己本学期的表现满意吗?老师还是比较满意的。你平时上课回答问题积极,发音清晰,作业也能按质按量完成,但有时上课注意力不是很集中,希望你能改掉这个缺点。这次考试你总体考的很好,但还要再接再厉哦。新学期马上就要开始了,希望你以饱满的热情投入到佳音的学习中来,我相信你一定可以做的更好!加油!

Jessica首先祝贺你以不错的成绩通过此次考试!你对自己本学期的表现满意吗?老师不是很满意哦。前半学期你的表现非常的好,上课发言积极,发音清晰,作业也能及时完成,但后半学期你的作业完成情况不是很好,作业不能按时完成作业,错的也没有订正,你这次单词鉴定就是一次教训。不过没关系,新学期马上就要开始了,希望你保持以前的饱满热情,积极投入到佳音的学习中来,我相信你一定可以做的更好!加油!

Alan 首先祝贺你以优异的成绩通过此次考试!你对自己本学期的表现满意吗?老师还是比较满意的。你平时上课回答问题较积极,作业也能按质按量完成,但有时上课注意力不是很集中,希望你能改掉这个缺点。这次考试你总体考的很好,但还要再接再厉哦。新学期马上就要开始了,希望你以饱满的热情投入到佳音的学习中来,我相信你一定可以做的.更好!加油!

Lynn首先祝贺你以优异的成绩通过此次考试!你对自己本学期的表现满意吗?老师非常满意。你是个乖巧的好学生,上课认真听讲,发音清晰,作业也能按质按量完成。老师很高兴能有你这样的学生。这次考试你总体考的很好,但还要再接再厉哦。新学期马上就要开始了,希望你以饱满的热情投入到佳音的学习中来,我相信你一定可以做的更好!加油!

James首先祝贺你以优异的成绩通过此次考试!你对自己本学期的表现满意吗?老师还是比较满意的。老师很高兴看到后半学期你进步了很多,特别是书写方面。这次你得了最佳书写奖,我想这与你的努力是分不开的。这次考试你总体考的很好,但还要再接再厉哦。新学期马上就要开始了,希望你以饱满的热情投入到佳音的学习中来,我相信你一定可以做的更好!加油!

Jason首先祝贺你以优异的成绩通过此次考试!你对自己本学期的表现满意吗?老师不是很满意哦。虽然你这次考得还不错,但你还是要认认真真看看你的缺点在哪。上半学期你的表现非常好,上课回答问题积极,作业也能认真完成。但后半学期你上课注意力不是很集中,经常和邻座产生摩擦,希望你能好好解决这个问题。新学期马上就要开始了,希望你以更加饱满的热情投入到佳音的学习中来,我相信你一定可以做的更好!加油!

Daniel首先祝贺你以不错的成绩通过此次考试!你对自己本学期的表现满意吗?老师不是很满意哦。虽然你这次考得还不差,但你还是要认认真真看看你的缺点在哪。你平时上课积极回答问题,但上课注意力不集中,有时还会和邻座产生摩擦,书写也还是个问题,希望你能解决这些问题。新学期马上就要开始了,希望你以更加饱满的热情投入到佳音的学习中来,我相信你一定可以做的更好!加油!

Danny首先祝贺你顺利通过此次考试!你对自己本学期的表现满意吗?老师还是比较满意的。你平时回答较积极,作业也能认真,从你这次的单词鉴定中老师可以看出你付出了努力。我们再来看一下你的笔试和口试,很遗憾,都没有及格。不过没关系,我相信通过我们共同的努力,我们一定可以克服困难,取得更好的成绩,一定要有信心哦!加油!

Kitty首先祝贺你顺利通过此次考试!你对自己本学期的表现满意吗?老师不是很满意哦。前半学期你表现的非常好。上课发言积极,发音清晰,作业也能按质按量完成。但后半学期,作业完成情况不是很好,上课回答问题也磕磕跘跘,导致这次口语考的很不理想。希望这能引起的重视。新学期马上就要开始了,希望你以更加饱满的热情投入到佳音的学习中来,我相信你一定可以做的更好!加油!

Rob首先祝贺你以优异的成绩通过此次考试!你对自己本学期的表现满意吗?老师很满意哦。你是个乖巧的好学生,上课认真听讲,发音清晰,作业也能按质按量完成。老师很高兴能有你这样的学生。这次考试你总体考的很好,但还要再接再厉哦。新学期马上就要开始了,希望你以饱满的热情投入到佳音的学习中来,我相信你一定可以做的更好!加油!

Gary首先祝贺你以优异的成绩通过此次考试!你对自己本学期的表现满意吗?老师很满意哦。你是个乖巧的好学生,上课认真听讲,发音清晰,作业也能按质按量完成。老师很高兴能有你这样的学生。这次笔试和口试都考了100,我想这是你平时努力的结果吧。新学期马上就要开始了,希望你以饱满的热情投入到佳音的学习中来,我相信你一定可以走得更远!加油!

Linda首先祝贺你以优异的成绩通过此次考试!你对自己本学期的表现满意吗?老师还是比较满意的。你平时上课回答问题积极,发音清晰,但后半学期作业完成得不是很理想,错的地方也没有订正,希望你能及时改掉这个缺点。新学期马上就要开始了,希望你以更加饱满的热情投入到佳音的学习中来,我相信你一定可以走得更远!加油!

如何写英文学生评语 [篇2]

学生英文评语(一)

yinuo

yinuo is an absolute pleasure to teach. her english is very advanced but she seems to enjoy learning the new things that we are teaching in class and she is always full of confidence which is great! i’m looking forward to getting to know her more.

mia

mia is a good step ahead of the rest of the class when it comes to saying sentences and vocabulary however she is always experimenting with new ways to say things and still loves to learn the things i’m teaching. she is super

oscar

oscar is a really great little boy who is always happy to learn and loves to participate. he understands a lot of what is going on in class and his pronunciation and confidence are improving all the time. keep up the great work!

cici

cici is still doing really well in my classes. she seems to enjoy classes a lot and loves to learn new things but please keep practicing at home to build up some more confidence. otherwise i am very pleased with her progress.

sissy

sissy is very confident in class when she understands what is going on but she is very quiet when we are learning new topics. she is doing great in class and her pronunciation is very good so keep practicing to build up that confidence that i know she has.

lily

lily is a very bright girl but she is very easily distracted in class and therefore is struggling to remember a lot of vocabulary. keep practicing at home so she can build up more confidence and get more involved in class.

annie

annie is still very quiet in class. she listens well to what is going on but she doesn’t always participate in activities. please keep practicing at home with her to build up more confidence with speaking and keep up the super work!

jerry

jerry is still as smart as ever. he really loves to learn and he is very well behaved in class. he speaks clearly and listens intently all the time. his progress is going very well and i’m still very happy with his development.

lucy

lucy is still doing really great at remembering new vocabulary and she is very active in class. her sentences are going really well but keep practicing at home to build up more speaking confidence. i am really pleased with her.

ivy

ivy is such a wonderful little girl. she is so well behaved and loves to learn all the time. her pronunciation is very clear and she always remembers new vocabulary. i’m so happy to teach her and very pleased with her progress.

mia

mia is still wonderful as ever. her pronunciation really is outstanding. she speaks so clearly and she has such confidence with speaking when she wants to. she really is progressing so well and i’m so happy to have her in my class.

sophia

sophia is always improving in my classes. she is always keen to learn and picks things up really well. she participates every day and listens really intently in class. i am so proud of all her progress since we first met.

yana

yana has been really good the past few weeks. she is picking up more sentences as the weeks go on but please keep practicing them at home so she can build up more confidence. i am really pleased with all her progress.

amanda

amanda is such a bright little girl with huge learning potential. she is participating really well in all my classes and she seems to be getting along really well with the other children too. i can’t wait to see what else she has to offer.

jake

jake is still doing really great in english class. he is always happy to learn and his confidence is building all the time. he can sometimes be easily distracted but he’s a smart boy and always picks things up quickly!

jason

jason is still as smart as ever. he really loves to learn and he is very well behaved in class. he speaks clearly and listens intently all the time. his progress is going very well and i’m still very happy with his development.

stephen

stephen is constantly improving in my class. his vocabulary has expanded a great deal since we first met and i am so pleased with all of his progress. (#url#)he is always happy to learn and participate and i am so proud of him.

学生英文评语(二)

peter

peter is a bright little boy with a lot of potential for learning but he struggles to remember a lot of vocabulary still. this will come with time and practice so keep practicing at home. other than that he is really doing super and i am very proud.

carey

carey is doing great this week. she can still sometimes be easily distracted in class however she is picking things up really well recently. i am very happy with her progress so far and i hope she keeps up the good work!

dea

dea is very good at learning new things. she listens and participates well in class and she picks things up very quickly. her sentences are improving and i am really pleased with all her progress. keep up the super work.

charles

the past couple of weeks charles has been doing so well. he is still very easily side-tracked however his progress is developing all the time. he has been speaking english a lot more in class recently and loves to join in with all the games and activities.

yoyo

yoyo is doing great as always. she is very confident during group activities but when it comes to speaking on her own she gets very shy sometimes. keep practicing at home to work on this confidence and keep up the superb work!

colin

colin is doing wonderful as always. he is so well behaved in class and loves to learn new things and speak english. i’ve noticed huge improvements with him and he’s developing at such a good pace. i’m so pleased with his progress.

jerry

jerry is improving all the time but his confidence has dwindled since i last saw him so please keep practicing new words and sentences at home. he is a very bright boy and i am really pleased with his progress.

jodie

jodie is a very bright girl but she is very easily distracted in class and therefore is struggling to remember a lot of vocabulary. keep practicing at home so she can build up more confidence and get more involved in class.

maggie

maggie is very good at learning new things. she listens and participates well in class and she picks things up very quickly. her sentences are improving and i am really pleased with all her progress. keep up the super work.

oliver

oliver is a good step ahead of the rest of the class when it comes to saying sentences and vocabulary however he is always experimenting with new ways to say things and still loves to learn the things i’m teaching. he is super.

mickey

mickey is such a smart boy who is a very good learner. he still loves to participate and answer questions. he is happy to be in class and speaks very confidently. i am very happy with all his development over the past few months!

sheryl

sheryl is still a pleasure as ever. she is getting more and more confident with sentences these past few weeks and she is really trying to put things together herself. she’s doing great and i am really happy with her.

jake

jake is really doing absolutely fantastic in class. he completely understands what is going on in class and he seems to enjoy class so much more. he participates in everything and loves to help out the other children with their sentences. i am so impressed.

daniel

daniel is still ma-ki-ng improvements every week. he still has a lot of catching up to do and he still has to work on his sentences but he is definitely getting better all the time. keep practicing and keep up the super work.

jill

jill is doing fantastic the past few weeks. she seems to have a much better understanding of what is going on in class and because of this reason she is starting to participate much better and pay attention more.

myron

myron is such a bright little boy with huge potential for learning. he is saying sentences with such ease and his pronunciation is excellent. he is gaining confidence every week and i am so happy with him.

tony

tony is superb as always. he is still very well behaved in class and therefore learns new language very quickly. he is great at remembering vocabulary and he is putting good sentences together. he’s doing great.

allan

allan has been doing great again this week. he picks things up quickly but tends to forget them easily so please keep practicing at home. he is participating well and his sentences are improving all the time.

tom

tom is really great at participating in activities that i am leading, he can repeat after me extremely well and he loves to learn new things. he still has some catching up to do so keep practicing at home but i am really happy with him.

lisa

lisa is still ma-ki-ng huge improvements all the time. she is getting much better at listening and her pronunciation is constantly improving. i am really pleased with all the progress she has made and i am so proud of her.

robbie

robbie is a really confident bright little boy with huge potential. he has good pronunciation and he is very well-behaved in class. his listening is really improving and i am so pleased with all his progress.

dudu

dudu has made massive improvements recently. he is listening very well in class and therefore is learning so much more vocabulary. he is very well behaved and participating really well in class. i am so pleased with him.

thomas

thomas is ma-ki-ng really good progress recently. he still struggles with new vocabulary so keep practicing at home but he has become much more social in class and enjoys participating a lot more now. keep up the good work!

yvonne

yvonne is still an absolute pleasure to teach. she is improving all the time and she speaks very clearly, she also loves to participate. this week she has been doing really great at saying new sentences and i’m very pleased.

david

david is doing really well in class the past week. he is ma-ki-ng improvements all the time and slowly building up more confidence. his sentences need some work so please keep practicing but other than that i am really pleased.

christina

christina is starting to say more sentences and is starting to get a better understanding of what’s going on in class recently. i am really pleased with all her efforts. she is listening more and i am really happy.

jason

jason is ma-ki-ng developments every week but he is still easily distracted and not confident with his speaking. he will grow out of this soon but in the meantime please keep practicing at home with him.

wendy

wendy is a very bright girl as always who really has great learning potential. she learns things very easily and is always happy to participate. her sentences are getting better all the time and i am really pleased with her.

hardy

hardy is such a bright little boy who is doing fantastic as always. he is great at ma-ki-ng up his own sentences and he is always happy to learn new things. i am so proud of all his hard work in class. keep it up!

学生英文评语(三)

amanda

amanda has been going well, she is saying the words. but after a little bit of encouragement, she is becoming a little bit more confident with her speaking out loud in class. keep practicing sentences at home.

colin

colin is going well; he is active and answers all the questions i am asking from him. he is very eager to get up in front of the class and do the action or find the new pictures and say the word.

ivy

ivy is participating very well in the class, she always likes to say the new words or sentences that we have just learnt. when asked a question; she thinks very hard and comes up with some great unique ways of saying the sentence.

mia

mia is a very bright little girl, her vocabulary is very good. she always comes up with different sentences when i ask her a question; she is very active in the class which is very good.

jason

jason is taking part in the class, he is still a little shy. but when asked a question he usually has no trouble answering it. when it is his turn to come up in front of the class, he is a little bit tentative. but eventually comes up.

oliver

oliver is a very bright boy who is always participating in the class. when i ask him a question he does not hesitate and always gives me a different answer which is fantastic. he understands everything that is going on in class.

cici

cici is still ma-ki-ng improvements all the time. she is getting more confident with the more vocabulary she is remembering. she is slowly getting more and more active in class, which is really great.

yana

yana has missed a few classes this week but other than that she is remembering vocabulary much better and participating really well; she is still a little bit shy in class. but over time she will be much more vocal.

jerry

jerry is going well even though he has missed a few classes; he is remembering vocabulary really well and he is starting to use it more often. he is still very quiet but he is ma-ki-ng super progress all the time. i am really pleased.

yoyo

yoyo is getting along really well in class. she is always keen to participate and shows great potential for learning. her sentences are improving all the time and she is coming up with some very unique answers to my questions.

lucy

lucy is becoming really involved in lessons and she is remembering a lot of vocabulary and starting to use it frequently, she is always putting her hand up to come up in front of the class i am really impressed with her and i hope she keeps it up!

jake

king is going well, he is very active in class and is always putting his hand up to come up and do the action or say the sentence. his vocabulary is continuing to improve which is very good.

dea

dea is going well in class, she has opened up a lot since the first class we had. she is saying the new words and sentences really well and is coming up in front of the class to practice what she has just leant.

annie

annie is coming along in leaps and bounds, she is really starting to understand the new words and sentences. she is becoming more aware of what is going on in class and her listening skills are getting much better.

lily

lily is still a little bit quiet and shy, but she is saying the new words and sentences. she is becoming more active during the class, and i can see that in know time she will be very active in the class.

stephen

stephen is going well in class, he was very shy to begin with. but he has now opened up a little bit and is saying the new words and sentences. he is becoming active in the class which is really good.

yinuo

yinuo is a very bright and smart little girl, her english knowledge is fantastic. she is very active in class and really enjoys getting up in front of the class and practicing the new words and sentences. she has a great grasp on the lessons and understands everything we are doing.

mia

amy is going well; she has started to become more active in the class, which is really great to see. she is saying the new words and sentences well; is getting more active in class.

sophia

sophia is going really well, she is very active during class and has a good understanding of what is going on during the class. she enjoys getting up in front of the class and practicing the new words and sentences.

sissy

sissy has opened up more in class; in the beginning she was a little bit shy. but now she is saying the new words and sentences rally well. she is getting more active which is really good to see.

oscar

oscar is a very bright little boy, he has a great grasp on the class and understands everything that is going on. he is very active in the class and is one of the first students to put his hand up and practice the new words and sentences.

jodie

jodie is going really well in class, she is participating in almost every activity and is very active. she enjoys getting up in front of the class and practicing what she has just learnt.

charles

charles is active during class and has a good understanding of what is going on in the class. he will get up and say the new words and sentences.

carrie

carrie is a smart little girl, she has a good understanding of english and is really starting to participate in the class well. she now enjoys getting up in front of the class and practicing the new words.

maggie

maggie is going well in class, she has opened up a lot since the first class we had. she is saying the new words and sentences really well and is coming up in front of the class to practice what she has just leant.

学生英文评语(四)

mia

mia is really beginning to understand a lot more that is going on in class. she is starting to get used to putting sentences together and she is saying things more clearly. keep revising at home and keep it up!

colin

colin understands a lot more of what is going on in class recently and he has started asking a lot more questions which is great. he still forgets some vocabulary but overall he is doing superb and i am really happy.

ivy

ivy is still a delight to teach but recently she has been very easily distracted in class and forgetting a lot of vocabulary. she is still doing superb at answering questions and still enjoys being in class a lot. keep up the good work.

mia

mia is always doing fantastic in my class as you already know. this week has been no different. she’s really doing great at trying to put new sentences together by herself and i am really pleased with all her efforts.

yana

yana is still progressing all the time. she has super pronunciation and understanding, she always knows what’s going on in class and she loves to participate. i am proud as ever of her hard work and achievements.

jason

jason is doing great in class as always. he is a very bright little boy and he is doing really well with his sentences. sometimes he forgets some vocabulary so keep practicing but apart from that he’s great.

jake

eason is a great little boy with a huge potential for learning. he participates really well in class, he remembers vocabulary, and he is always eager to learn. keep practicing at home to keep his confidence up!

oliver

oliver is doing superb as usual. he enjoys doing new things and enjoys learning a lot. i am always very pleased with his progress. his sentences are improving nicely and he’s ma-ki-ng good progress as always.

jodie

jodie is still a wonderful little girl to have in my class. once she has something in her head that she knows and understands she repeats it constantly in class. this is good but keep practicing at home so she can branch out a little.

cici

cici makes huge improvements all the time but she is painfully shy when she speaks to me sometimes. her english speaking is going great and her sentences are improving well so keep practicing to build up confidence.

amanda

amanda is a delightful little girl to teach but she forgets a lot of vocabulary regularly. this will improve if you keep practicing at home. other than that she is participating really well and she is improving all the time.

jerry

jerry is still a very quiet boy in my classes but he is improving all the time. he is remembering more vocabulary and because of this he is getting more confident with his speaking. he is doing really well.

yoyo

yoyo is such a bright little girl with a great ability to learn. she is always happy to participate and her sentences are improving all the time. i am really happy with her progress and efforts in class so keep up the super work.

lucy

lucy makes improvements in class all the time. she’s happy to learn new things and her pronunciation is always improving. i am really pleased with the developments she’s ma-ki-ng in class and with her sentences.

jerry

jerry is still doing great in class but lacks confidence with his speaking. when he says a sentence he only says half of it then mumbles the rest as he is unsure how to go on. he’s doing superb but keep practicing to build up confidence.

dea

dea is a very bright girl with great pronunciation. she is remembering much more vocabulary but she is not completely confident with her sentences yet. keep practicing saying random si-mp-le sentences at home to build up confidence.

annie

anne has great potential for learning but she has no confidence in class. she is still very quiet and doesn’t always pay attention or take part. please keep practicing words and si-mp-le sentences at home to build up confidence.

lily

lily has been the same as ever the past couple of weeks. she struggles to take part and pay attention in class. she is a very bright girl with a lot of potential but still has a lot of catching up to do. please keep practicing and keep up the good work.

stephen

stephen has really made massive improvements since i first met him. he is much more attentive in class and his listening skills have really improved. he recognizes a lot more vocabulary and he is getting more confident as the weeks go on.

yinuo

yinuo is doing superb again this week. she always understands what is going on and she is constantly trying out new sentences and ways to say thing. she is a very bright girl and i am very happy to have her in my class.

charles

charles is doing really great again this week. he is happy to learn new things and always participates really well in class. he is saying sentences very well and his confidence with speaking is building all the time.

sophia

sophia has been really ma-ki-ng an effort to put new sentences of her own together this week and i am really pleased with that. this means she is understanding a lot and starting to think outside the box. keep up the great work.

sissy

sissy is starting to say more sentences of her own recently and is becoming slightly more confident with this weeks topic. she is always happy to learn new things and she is a very bright girl. keep up the good work.

oscar

oscar is doing great again this week. he is very confident with his speaking recently and he learns very quickly. i am really happy with his progress and i hope he continues to keep up the excellent work.

如何写英文学生评语 [篇3]

Tony – Tony is going really well; he is saying the new words and is trying very hard with the new sentences。 He really enjoys coming up to the front of the class and performing the actions that go along with the songs, he is trying really hard to remember the new words and sentences。

Alan – Alan is going really well in the class; he sits in his chair and waits for his turn。 He is doing a great job with remembering the new words; he is always trying his best with everything that he does。 He enjoys singing the new songs。

Frank – Frank is going great; he is feeling much better and is really trying very hard with the new words。 He is slowly catching up with the other children, I am sure he will be able to say all the new words and sentences。 He is very active in the class and is trying to talk more。 Lewis - Lewis is going really well in class; he has a good understanding of what we are doing。 He participates well in every

activity and really tries very hard with everything that he is doing。 Lewis enjoys coming to the front of the class and performing the action that go along with the songs。

Jessie – Jessie is having a great time in the class; he seems to understand what we are doing and has no trouble repeating the words。 He really enjoys doing the actions and singing the songs, he is always happy to come to the front of class and practice the new words。

David – David is going well; he is slowly coming to the front of the class to practice what we are learning。 He is trying hard with the new words and sentences; he really enjoys singing the new songs and performing the actions that go along with them。

Michael - Michael is going really well in class; he is very active in class and is having no trouble with the new words and sentences。 He really participates well in all the activities and tries his best with

everything that he does。 He is slowly enjoying the songs, and I am sure that before too long he will really like singing。

Joyce – Joyce is going great in the class; she is always trying her best with the new words and sentences。 Sometimes she says the new words only after hearing them once, which is fantastic。 She likes playing games with me and is always happy and smiling in the class。 Cindy – Cindy has been away from class

Tomi – Tomi is going really well in class; he is having no trouble with the new words and sentences。 He is participating well in all class activities; he really enjoys singing the new songs。 When it is his turn to come to the front of the class to practice the new words he is very happy。

如何写英文学生评语 [篇4]

现在,学生英语写作水平的高低是对学生英语综合运用能力的评价指标之一,这已经受到了英语老师的普通重视,在作文教学中教师们可谓“八仙过海,各显其能”,但在对学生作文进行评价时,多数教师只是给学生一个分数或等级,很少能像中文教师那样,在学生的作文后写上自己对学生作文比较具体和明确的看法或意见的。其实,教师的评语是对学生英语书面表达能力和自主学习情况的评价和指导。我在作文评改中借鉴中文教师的做法,用英语写评语,让学生在真实的英语交际环境中,书面语能力也能得到提高。实际上,教师为学生的英语作文写评语,不仅有利于提高学生的英语书面交际能力,而且有利于促进师生的知识,思想和情感交流,还有利于提高学生自主学习的积极性,下面,笔者就如何写英语评语谈一点看法和体会。

1、适时恰当地评价

老师应及时地批改作文,及时了解学生的学习进步状况和学习效果,以便掌握情况,进行指导。有些学生在作文中写到了一些自己遇到的特殊的问题和想法,他们盼望老师的评价和指导,所以教师应急学生之所急,及时地给予恰当的评价。教师在写评语时使用的词汇和语法知识不能过高或过低于学生的现有水平,最好能及时地应用学生新近学到的词汇和语法,这样有助于学生对新知识加深理解和强化记忆,也可让学生看到知识如何在实践中运用。当然评语中偶尔也可以有几个生词,有时候学生通过上下文就能理解,有时学生查字典来解决,这样做也利于学生的猜词能力的提高和扩大词汇量,有时适当地用英语习语或谚语写评语,使学生更多地感悟英语的简洁和优美。

(1)Do in Rome as the Romans do

(2)Actions speak louder than words

(3)Go helps those who help themselves

(4)It is the first step that costs

(5)Always put yourself in others’ shoes

2、多加鼓励,增加学生英语学习自信心

“自信是成功的第一秘诀”,爱迪生曾说过“相信自己能的人就会赢”,无论对什么样的学生,老师都要让他树立一个信念“我能行”!因此,当老师在学生的作文中看到运用得好的词汇句型,表达了不同的观点,或文章充满了想象力和幽默感等一切“闪光点”时,应不失时机地给予表扬或鼓励的评语,这样每个学生都会有成就感,而成就动机能够很好地激发人的学习动机。

Well, your handwriting is very good.

Great! I appreciate what you’ve done for your class.

You’re a good student with sense of responsibility.

I marvel at the maturity of such a young child as you.

You’ve made fabulous progress, and I’m sure you’ll succeed.

3、以情动人

作文不仅仅是师生间教学信息的互相反馈,而且是联系和沟通师生情感的桥梁。从作文中,细心的教师能觉察到学生的思想和情感的变化,同样,从教师的评语中学生能领悟到教师对学生是否真诚、有信心和有责任心,教师对学生的努力一定要有切合实际的鼓励;对他们取得的成绩、进步,要在评语中表现出发自内心的赞赏和喜悦;对学生作文中的错误和思想情绪的变化一定要诚心诚意地以恰当的方式指出;对一些成绩落后的学生要有同情心和责任心。赞扬要恰如其分,批评要适当委婉,重在鼓励,教师应以平等的态度与学生开展评论性的讨论,营造一种平等、自由的学术气氛,让学生与教师能在作文和评语中自由的交流思想,让学生拥有创造性地运用所学知识的机会和自由。 As fire tries gold, so does adversity try courage. Nobody knows what he can do till he has tried. You’ve made a good start.

A good beginning is half the way of success.

Time waits for no man. Nothing is more precious than time, do you agree with me? Not only energy, but also persistence is necessary to success, do you think so?

No pains, no gains.

有道是“精成所至,金石为开”,教师的热情和真诚必然会在一定程度上引起学生的思想转折和学习成绩的飞跃,现在学生们很乐意把自己的思想动态和情感变化写在作文中,并急切盼望看到我给他们的评语,并对我的评语做出回应。曾有位学生回复说我就像他的妈妈一样关心他,我们都非常珍视这种师生间真诚的交流。

4、因材施教,授人以渔

在写评语时,除了帮助学生提高文化知识外,还要承认学生个体之间学习能力,掌握知识程度的差别,应因材施教,授人以渔。对于一些成绩落后的学生要保护他们的自尊心,帮助他们树立自信心,让他们也能得到继续发展。在批改他们的作文时,温和地指出错误的同时,指出他们的优点,以资鼓励。

I’m glad to know that you want to learn English well, I’d be glad to help you.

Nothing is difficult for us to learn if you want to learn.

It’s not helps but obstacles that make a man.

Where there’s a will, there is a will.

If the facts had been in a good order, the article would have been cleaner.

Your essay shows you have real ability in English, and you are developing, increasingly depth of thought and clarity of expression in your written work. But there are some grammar mistakes in it.

当然,在写英语作文评语的过程中,教师不仅需要不断提高自己的英语书面表达能力,更重要的是要深入研究学生的心理特点、思想情绪、个人爱好、学习习惯,以及英语程度等等,以便言之有物,以理服人,因材施教。总之,给学生写评语既是一件艰苦的事,又是一门学问,写得好会给学生培养和提高书面交际能力带来很大的帮助,其作用不可低估。